全国2009年1月高等教育自学考试00603英语写作答案
全国2009年1月高等教育自学考试英语写作试题及答案
课程代码：00603
I. Supply the missing paragraph (20 points)
The following passage is incomplete with one body paragraph missing. Study the following passage carefully and write a body paragraph of about 100 words. Make sure that the tone and vocabulary you use are in unity with the passage provided.
With the rapid development of the modern society, education is becoming more and more crucial to both individuals and the society. The issue over what education should consist of has considerably aroused people’s wide concern. In this essay, I will seek to explore this complicated topic from diverse perspectives and what influence could be brought.
Among the most important aspects education should consist of, one that should be stressed is professional knowledge education. On the one hand, under the fiercely competitive circumstance, people who have professional skills and experience attract many big companies. Therefore, professional knowledge gives people more opportunities to hunt an ideal job. On the other hand, this aspect of education is also significant to develop the society in the long run.
In the second place, what is also worth noticing is that physical education is necessary for students, especially for teenagers. If you want to achieve success in the modern society, a strong body is the first premise, which always keeps you in shape. So education should push people to take care of themselves and this could bring great benefits to the healthy society.
____The last but not least is the moral education. With the development of society, great changes have taken place in China, especially the economic development, so the society become more and more complicated. We should teach the young people what is right and what is wrong and make them have the correct value about the world. So the moral education is also the factors to be focus on. (答案仅供参考)
【评分参考】
1. 第一部分满分20分，按四个档次给分。其中12分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
2. 提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的回答和参考答案意思相近，或思路新颖，且有创见，即使在整体上不够全面，也应酌情给高分，但不得超过该题最高分值。如果考生的回答与参考答案不完全吻合，但上下一致，语气连贯，条理清晰，应按正确答案给分。
3. 写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。
4. 答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
5. 分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： 20 — 17分
上下连贯，意思完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，很少有语法错误和拼写错误。
第二档： 16——12分
上下较连贯，语言较通顺，表达较清楚，有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档： 11 — 8分
上下基本连贯，语言表达不够清楚，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档： 7 — 0分
上下不够连贯，语言不够通顺，表达不清楚，有大量语法错误和拼写错误
Judging from what I have discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the three aspects cannot be separated in education. They play vital and important roles in the growth of individuals and the society. The fulfillment of both individuals and the society can be made as long as we lay emphasis on the three aspects mentioned above.
II. Write an outline (20 points)
Read the following passage carefully and compose a “sentence outline” for it.
Nowadays, giant jumble jets carry millions of people each day to and from almost all corners of the globe, giving most people the chance of visiting distant countries. However, many of us are sometimes, troubled by unfamiliar customs and traditions and are puzzled by the way foreigners behave. In my essay, both sides of the argument would be presented and analyzed as to whether we should follow the customs of the visited country, or all nations should be more willing to embrace exotic culture.
Some people maintain that it is better for one to adopt host countries’ culture for the following reasons. First of all, as the old saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do,” by observing and following their particular way of doing things, travelers can greatly reduce the chances of misunderstanding and embarrassment. For instance, it is advisable not to ask a western lady personal questions such as her age or her marital status on the first meeting, which is common practice in China. Secondly, a nation’s customs and traditions are often fascinating and offer a unique insight into that very country. Obviously, people travel in order to broaden their horizon or merely to relax and enjoy themselves. But these aims could not be satisfactorily fulfilled if they have no idea about a country’s culture. Moreover, your interest in and understanding of their ways of life could help to establish a rapport with the local people, because people feel respected when their customs and behaviors are understood and imitated, and by doing things in their way, you become unconsciously a member of them and thus will no longer experience culture shocks.
However, others also have strong reasons to believe that a country should tolerate and embrace foreign culture. In the first place, no country should cling to its old customs and traditions at all cost and expect others to follow suit. Culture should also be subject to changes brought about by advances in science and technology and the process of globalization. Like everything else, numerous traditional practices have been abandoned and people are forming new customs all the time. Besides, instead of challenging and damaging the local traditions, the customs brought by international visitors actually help to enhance our awareness of our own culture, by pointing out that what we take for granted is really not universally praised but rather unique characteristics of our own. In China, for instance, the Spring Festival is being celebrated with ever more enthusiasm despite the popularity of Christmas. Moreover, it is unjustifiable and unrealistic to expect visitors to alter their ways of doing things, and pick up some new behaviors and customs at short notice. Many Chinese Americans, for example, still live exclusively in Chinatowns and celebrate all the traditional Chinese holidays. Like a religious belief, one should be allowed to follow their own customs whenever and wherever they like.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter view that people can keep their own customs and nations should welcome cultural differences and integrate the positive aspects from other cultures to update their own. Apparently, if all are open-minded about different traditions and behaviors, the idea of a global village could come true in every corner of the earth, with people living in harmony and each enjoying his own cultural heritage.
Sentence outline
I. Thesis: The author wants to analyze whether we should follow the customs and culture of the visited country.
II. Some people maintain that it is better for one to adopt host countries’culture.
A. When in Rome, do as Romans do.
B. A nation’s customs and traditions are often fascinating and offer a unique insight into that very country.
C. Your interest in and understanding of their ways of life could help to establish a rapport with the local people.
III. Others also have strong reasons to believe that a country should tolerate and embrace foreign culture.
A. No country should cling to its old customs and traditions at all cost and expect others to follow suit.
B. Customs brought by international visitors actually help to enhance our awareness of our own culture.
IV. Conclusion: The author’s opinion is that we should keep our own customs and welcome culture differences. （答案仅供参考）
评分参考】
1. 第二部分满分20分，按四个档次给分。其中12分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
2．考生只能按题型要求写出“Sentence Outline”,如用“Topic Outline”或两种混用，则降档处理。如写成“Summary”或其它形式，则按零分处理。其中Thesis可置于Introduction之前。
3. 提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的答案在层次划分上与参考答案不一致，但条理清晰、概括完整，则按正确答案给分。
4. 答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
5. 分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： 20 — 17分
概括准确，内容完整，语言通顺，表达清楚。
第二档： 16——12分
概括较准确，个别要点有遗漏，语言较通顺，表达较清楚。
第三档： 11 — 8分
概括不够全面，部分要点有遗漏，语言基本通顺，表达基本清楚。
第四档： 7 — 0分
概括不够全面，遗漏大部分要点，语言不够通顺，表达不够清楚。
III. Compose an essay (60 points)
Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that the aid money is misspent by the governments that receive it, so international aid should not be given to the poor countries in the world. Write a short argumentative essay about 300 words discussing the two views of international aid.
参考答案略。
【评分参考】
１． 第三部分满分60分，按六个档次给分。其中３６分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
２．写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。
３．作文中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
４．分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： ６0——５５分
作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词准确，没有语法错误，很少有拼写错误。
第二档： ５４——４６分
作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词基本得当，有个别语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档：４５— ３６分
作文基本切题，内容较充实，结构较清晰、完整，语言较通顺，表达较清楚，有些用词不当，有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档：３５ — １８分
作文基本切题，内容不够充实，结构不够清晰，语言不够通顺，表达不够连贯，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第五档：１７ — １0分
作文部分切题，内容不够充实，结构不清晰，语言不通顺，表达不连贯，有许多语法错误和拼写错误。
第六档：９ — 0分
作文不切题，内容较空洞，结构较混乱，语言不通顺，无法表达连贯意思
下载答案WORD文档：
课程代码：00603
I. Supply the missing paragraph (20 points)
The following passage is incomplete with one body paragraph missing. Study the following passage carefully and write a body paragraph of about 100 words. Make sure that the tone and vocabulary you use are in unity with the passage provided.
With the rapid development of the modern society, education is becoming more and more crucial to both individuals and the society. The issue over what education should consist of has considerably aroused people’s wide concern. In this essay, I will seek to explore this complicated topic from diverse perspectives and what influence could be brought.
Among the most important aspects education should consist of, one that should be stressed is professional knowledge education. On the one hand, under the fiercely competitive circumstance, people who have professional skills and experience attract many big companies. Therefore, professional knowledge gives people more opportunities to hunt an ideal job. On the other hand, this aspect of education is also significant to develop the society in the long run.
In the second place, what is also worth noticing is that physical education is necessary for students, especially for teenagers. If you want to achieve success in the modern society, a strong body is the first premise, which always keeps you in shape. So education should push people to take care of themselves and this could bring great benefits to the healthy society.
____The last but not least is the moral education. With the development of society, great changes have taken place in China, especially the economic development, so the society become more and more complicated. We should teach the young people what is right and what is wrong and make them have the correct value about the world. So the moral education is also the factors to be focus on. (答案仅供参考)
【评分参考】
1. 第一部分满分20分，按四个档次给分。其中12分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
2. 提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的回答和参考答案意思相近，或思路新颖，且有创见，即使在整体上不够全面，也应酌情给高分，但不得超过该题最高分值。如果考生的回答与参考答案不完全吻合，但上下一致，语气连贯，条理清晰，应按正确答案给分。
3. 写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。
4. 答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
5. 分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： 20 — 17分
上下连贯，意思完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，很少有语法错误和拼写错误。
第二档： 16——12分
上下较连贯，语言较通顺，表达较清楚，有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档： 11 — 8分
上下基本连贯，语言表达不够清楚，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档： 7 — 0分
上下不够连贯，语言不够通顺，表达不清楚，有大量语法错误和拼写错误
Judging from what I have discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the three aspects cannot be separated in education. They play vital and important roles in the growth of individuals and the society. The fulfillment of both individuals and the society can be made as long as we lay emphasis on the three aspects mentioned above.
II. Write an outline (20 points)
Read the following passage carefully and compose a “sentence outline” for it.
Nowadays, giant jumble jets carry millions of people each day to and from almost all corners of the globe, giving most people the chance of visiting distant countries. However, many of us are sometimes, troubled by unfamiliar customs and traditions and are puzzled by the way foreigners behave. In my essay, both sides of the argument would be presented and analyzed as to whether we should follow the customs of the visited country, or all nations should be more willing to embrace exotic culture.
Some people maintain that it is better for one to adopt host countries’ culture for the following reasons. First of all, as the old saying goes, “When in Rome, do as the Romans do,” by observing and following their particular way of doing things, travelers can greatly reduce the chances of misunderstanding and embarrassment. For instance, it is advisable not to ask a western lady personal questions such as her age or her marital status on the first meeting, which is common practice in China. Secondly, a nation’s customs and traditions are often fascinating and offer a unique insight into that very country. Obviously, people travel in order to broaden their horizon or merely to relax and enjoy themselves. But these aims could not be satisfactorily fulfilled if they have no idea about a country’s culture. Moreover, your interest in and understanding of their ways of life could help to establish a rapport with the local people, because people feel respected when their customs and behaviors are understood and imitated, and by doing things in their way, you become unconsciously a member of them and thus will no longer experience culture shocks.
However, others also have strong reasons to believe that a country should tolerate and embrace foreign culture. In the first place, no country should cling to its old customs and traditions at all cost and expect others to follow suit. Culture should also be subject to changes brought about by advances in science and technology and the process of globalization. Like everything else, numerous traditional practices have been abandoned and people are forming new customs all the time. Besides, instead of challenging and damaging the local traditions, the customs brought by international visitors actually help to enhance our awareness of our own culture, by pointing out that what we take for granted is really not universally praised but rather unique characteristics of our own. In China, for instance, the Spring Festival is being celebrated with ever more enthusiasm despite the popularity of Christmas. Moreover, it is unjustifiable and unrealistic to expect visitors to alter their ways of doing things, and pick up some new behaviors and customs at short notice. Many Chinese Americans, for example, still live exclusively in Chinatowns and celebrate all the traditional Chinese holidays. Like a religious belief, one should be allowed to follow their own customs whenever and wherever they like.
As far as I am concerned, I agree with the latter view that people can keep their own customs and nations should welcome cultural differences and integrate the positive aspects from other cultures to update their own. Apparently, if all are open-minded about different traditions and behaviors, the idea of a global village could come true in every corner of the earth, with people living in harmony and each enjoying his own cultural heritage.
Sentence outline
I. Thesis: The author wants to analyze whether we should follow the customs and culture of the visited country.
II. Some people maintain that it is better for one to adopt host countries’culture.
A. When in Rome, do as Romans do.
B. A nation’s customs and traditions are often fascinating and offer a unique insight into that very country.
C. Your interest in and understanding of their ways of life could help to establish a rapport with the local people.
III. Others also have strong reasons to believe that a country should tolerate and embrace foreign culture.
A. No country should cling to its old customs and traditions at all cost and expect others to follow suit.
B. Customs brought by international visitors actually help to enhance our awareness of our own culture.
IV. Conclusion: The author’s opinion is that we should keep our own customs and welcome culture differences. （答案仅供参考）
评分参考】
1. 第二部分满分20分，按四个档次给分。其中12分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
2．考生只能按题型要求写出“Sentence Outline”,如用“Topic Outline”或两种混用，则降档处理。如写成“Summary”或其它形式，则按零分处理。其中Thesis可置于Introduction之前。
3. 提供的答案仅供参考。如果考生的答案在层次划分上与参考答案不一致，但条理清晰、概括完整，则按正确答案给分。
4. 答题中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
5. 分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： 20 — 17分
概括准确，内容完整，语言通顺，表达清楚。
第二档： 16——12分
概括较准确，个别要点有遗漏，语言较通顺，表达较清楚。
第三档： 11 — 8分
概括不够全面，部分要点有遗漏，语言基本通顺，表达基本清楚。
第四档： 7 — 0分
概括不够全面，遗漏大部分要点，语言不够通顺，表达不够清楚。
III. Compose an essay (60 points)
Many people think that countries have a moral obligation to help each other, while others argue that the aid money is misspent by the governments that receive it, so international aid should not be given to the poor countries in the world. Write a short argumentative essay about 300 words discussing the two views of international aid.
参考答案略。
【评分参考】
１． 第三部分满分60分，按六个档次给分。其中３６分为该部分的及格分，需要慎重把握。
２．写作的用词量如果不符合要求，应酌情减分。
３．作文中的拼写错误可以每四个扣1分，但不重复扣分。
４．分值不得出现0.5分。
第一档： ６0——５５分
作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词准确，没有语法错误，很少有拼写错误。
第二档： ５４——４６分
作文切题，内容充实，结构清晰、完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，用词基本得当，有个别语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档：４５— ３６分
作文基本切题，内容较充实，结构较清晰、完整，语言较通顺，表达较清楚，有些用词不当，有少数语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档：３５ — １８分
作文基本切题，内容不够充实，结构不够清晰，语言不够通顺，表达不够连贯，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第五档：１７ — １0分
作文部分切题，内容不够充实，结构不清晰，语言不通顺，表达不连贯，有许多语法错误和拼写错误。
第六档：９ — 0分
作文不切题，内容较空洞，结构较混乱，语言不通顺，无法表达连贯意思
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